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Your friend is going to stay in your apartment while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Tell him/her where to get the keys Explain how to operate some of the items in your house. Suggest some places to visit in the local area.

Your friend is going to stay in your apartment while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Tell him/her where to get the keys Explain how to operate some of the items in your house. Suggest some places to visit in the local area. 6lamK
Dear Manh How are you? How is your family? I’m surprised to hear that you’re going to live in my apartment. I regret welcoming you as I’m on holiday with my family. It’s no bother as I help you out anyway. Before travelling to Sam Son, I sent the key of my flat to the receptionist on the first floor of the building. If you want to get this, you should go to meet this person to answer. I’ll guide you on how to use two main things in my apartment. First of all, It has an air conditioning at the right corner of my flat. You can use a remote control to turn it on when you feel hot. Next, I also possess a bookcase in my bedroom. If you don’t know what to do, you will pick a book to read. But remember, when you finish reading my book, you have to put it in the right space. Around this building, it would be no hassle for me to show you some places to visit. There’s a cafe near the building, where you will enjoy a cup of coffee in your free time. On the other hand, opposite to a high-rise flat, there is a grocery store called Vinmart. Everyone usually buys some important thing in this store. Anyway, let me know what I can do to help you. See you later. Your friend Quang
Dear
Manh


How are you? How is your family? I’m surprised to hear that you’re going to
live
in my apartment. I regret welcoming you as I’m on holiday with my family. It’s no bother as I
help
you out anyway.

Before
travelling to Sam Son, I
sent
the key of my flat to the receptionist on the
first
floor of the building. If you want to
get
this, you should go to
meet
this person to answer.

I’ll guide you on how to
use
two main things in my apartment.
First of all
, It has an air conditioning at the right corner of my flat. You can
use
a remote control to turn it on when you feel hot.
Next
, I
also
possess a bookcase in my bedroom. If you don’t know what to do, you will pick a book to read.
But
remember, when you finish reading my book, you
have to
put it in the right space.

Around this building, it would be no hassle for me to
show
you
some
places to visit. There’s a
cafe
near the building, where you will enjoy a cup of coffee in your free time.
On the other hand
, opposite to a high-rise flat, there is a grocery store called
Vinmart
. Everyone
usually
buys
some
important
thing in this store.

Anyway,
let
me know what I can do to
help
you.
See
you later.

Your friend

Quang
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IELTS letter Your friend is going to stay in your apartment while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Tell him/her where to get the keys Explain how to operate some of the items in your house. Suggest some places to visit in the local area.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
236 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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