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trains arrive late and are overcrowded

trains arrive late and are overcrowded rKGro

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in regards to the train moving from London to Manchester which has caused serious problems for passengers. There are frequently delays, making difficulties such as overcrowded and long queues at the station. I am quite sure if you visit this station will find that people there complaining about this delay and how this poor service has negative effects on their daily commuting. More often than not, people arrive too late at their destinations and as there are not enough carriages, they have to stay on long queues to get into the train. All that has made the station very crowded. Consider this circumstance; I’d like to ask you for putting more trains, ensuring that there are enough carriages to move people to work or home. And also it would be much better if you push your employees to stick more to the schedule given by your company. I look forward to a swift resolution to this matter. Yours faithfully,

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".in regard towith regard toregarding
in regards to
 the train moving from London to Manchester which has caused serious problems for passengers. There are frequently
 delays, making difficulties such as overcrowded and long queues at the station.

I am quite sure if you visit this station will find that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 there complaining about this delay and how this poor service has This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 effects on their daily commuting. More This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
 than not, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 arrive too late at their destinations and as there are not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 carriages, they This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 stay on long queues to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 into the train. All that has made the station This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 crowded.

Consider this circumstance; I’d like to ask you for putting more trains, ensuring that there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 carriages to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 to work or home. And also
 it would be much better if you push your employees to stick more to the schedule This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 by your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
.

I look forward to a swift resolution to this matter.

Yours faithfully
, 