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You stay in a room with another student and finding it difficult. Write to accommodation officer about your situation,explain your problems and why is it difficult to work and what kind of room you prefer.

You stay in a room with another student and finding it difficult. Write to accommodation officer about your situation, explain your problems and why is it difficult to work and what kind of room you prefer. XDqp8
I am writing to let you know that I am currently facing an issue in my room. The room is quite adequate with regards to the facilities provided but it's my roommate with whom it's getting difficult to manage. I hope you consider my situation favorably. Let me explain my situation. My current roommate usually works from home during the early hours of the Indian time zone. So he is mostly awake at night and even keeps the light switched on. For the same reason, I am not able to have a good night's sleep which affects my focus on studies at my University. Would you kindly consider transferring either me or my roommate to another room? I would like to share my accommodation with someone who preferably works or studies during the morning hours. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Neda.
I am writing to
let
you know that I am
currently
facing an issue in my room. The room is quite adequate
with regards to
the facilities provided
but
it's my roommate with whom it's getting difficult to manage. I hope you consider my situation
favorably
.

Let
me
explain
my situation. My
current
roommate
usually
works from home during the early hours of the Indian time zone.
So
he is
mostly
awake at night and even
keeps
the light switched on. For the same reason, I am not able to have a
good
night's sleep which affects my focus on studies at my University.

Would you kindly consider transferring either me or my roommate to another room? I would like to share my accommodation with someone who
preferably
works or studies during the morning hours.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours
faithfully
,

Neda
.
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IELTS letter You stay in a room with another student and finding it difficult. Write to accommodation officer about your situation, explain your problems and why is it difficult to work and what kind of room you prefer.

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  American English
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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