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Letter to a friend to recommendation to get a job

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Hi Dear, I am writing this letter to get help from one of my school friend for a IT job. If you have any contact please share and i know better about him. John is one of my friend completed his college in New York and proceeded with higher graduation at New Jersey college of arts. Now he completed the degree in computer science and planning to start his career in job repudiated company since he is a gold medalist i believe he will do his best in his work as well. I request you to recommend him for any opening in your company and he will be glade to work for your company. I have attached his resume below and please go through it and let me know your thoughts. please let me know if any additional details are required. Thanks, Sam.
Hi Dear, I am writing this letter to
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get
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help
from one of my school friend for
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a
IT job. If you have any contact
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please
share and
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i
know better about him.

John is one of my friend completed his college in New York and proceeded with higher graduation at New Jersey college of arts.
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Now
he completed the degree in computer science and planning to
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start
his career in job repudiated
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company
since he is a gold medalist
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i
believe he will do his best in his work
as well
.

I request you to recommend him for any opening in your
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company and
he will be glade to work for your
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company
. I have attached his resume below and
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please
go through it and
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let
me know your thoughts.

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please
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let
me know if any additional
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details
are required
.

Thanks,

Sam.
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IELTS letter Letter to a friend to recommendation to get a job

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
143 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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