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your friend is coming to visit you

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Dear Sara and John, I am delighted that you are coming to my town next weekend. I can show you around and we will visit some famous and ancient landscapes. You do not need to bring lots of clothes as the weather is normally warm and sunny. However, in the evening it's a little bit colder, so you may need a jacket. I think it would be great if you can stay with me and my family for couple of days. Otherwise, I can easily book you a cheap but comfortable accommodation near the city center, so that you can be much independent and visit the whole town as well as shopping malls. There are lots of things to do and many places to go. If I were you, I would spend some days in Lavasan and enjoy the fresh and pure weather. Also, there are several fantastic museums and towers such as Golestan museum and Milad tower which you should not miss them. One place you really should visit is an wonderful ancient Tehran Bazaar that you need to spend the whole day. Please let me know when exactly you are coming so that I can meet you in the airport. It'll be great to meet you soon. Love, Mari

Dear Sara and John,

I am delighted
 that you are coming to my town next
 weekend. I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 you Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).around, and
around and
 we will visit This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 and ancient landscapes.

You do not need to bring lots of clothes as the weather is normally
 warm and sunny. However
, in the evening it's a Reduce redundancy by using "little" or "bit".littlebit
little bit
 colder, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 you may need a jacket.

I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 it would be great if you can stay with me and my family for It seems that an article is missing.a couple of
couple of
 days. Otherwise
, I can easily
 book you a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :economical
cheap
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 comfortable accommodation near the city center, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that you can be much independent and visit the whole town as well
 as shopping malls.

There are lots of things to do and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 places to go. If I were you, I would spend This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 days in Possible spelling mistake found.Láadan
Lavasan
 and enjoy the fresh and pure weather. Also
, there are several fantastic museums and towers such as Possible spelling mistake found.GoldsteinPolestar
Golestan
 museum and Possible spelling mistake found.MilanMildMiladyMi ladMil adMila
Milad
 tower which you should not miss them. One place you really
 should visit is Use "a" instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'a
an
 wonderful ancient Tehran Bazaar that you need to spend the whole day.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know when exactly you are coming This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 you in the airport. It'll be great to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
Love
,

Mari