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Dear Mr. and Mrs. , James Hope this letter finds you well I have saw your advertisement in a website for a teaching job, if I understand your listing you want a toutar for your kids, two of them. I will list the reason why I believe I would be a perfect fit for the role, first of all, I have plenty of experanice working with kids and have a colloage degree in Arabic, secondly, I currenty hold the position of an Arabic teacher in a high school and teach 3 levels from 10 to 12 grade, thirdly my knowledge of the English language will make communication much easier You mentioned that you also travel for work allot and sometimes have to hire baby sitter for days, if you wish I can play that role and with no extra charge One of the most important reasons for wanting this job is that I get to see your beautiful contery as well as getting to know your culture first hand I do hope you pick me for the job opening Yours truly Osama riyadh

Dear Mr. and Mrs.Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma,
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 James

Hope this letter finds you well

I have Use past participle here: "sawed", "sawn", "seen".sawedsawnseen
saw
 your advertisement in a website for a teaching job, if I understand your listing you want a Possible spelling mistake found.totaltouroutermortartutorrouter
toutar
 for your kids, two of them.

I will list the reason why I believe I would be a perfect fit for the role, This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".first
first of all
, I have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
plenty
 of Possible spelling mistake found.experienceexpertisetemperanceexuberance
experanice
 working with kids and have a Possible spelling mistake found.collage
colloage
 degree in Arabic, secondly
, I Possible spelling mistake found.currentcurrentlycurrencycurrentscurrent y
currenty
 hold the position of an Arabic teacher in a high school and teach 3 levels from 10 to 12 grade, thirdly
 my knowledge of the English language will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 communication much easier

You mentioned that you also
 travel for work allot and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 hire baby sitter for days, if you wish I can play that role and with no extra charge

One of the most This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 reasons for wanting this job is that I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
Possible spelling mistake found.Connery
contery
as well
 as getting to know your culture first
 hand

I do hope you pick me for the job opening

Yours truly


Osama Possible spelling mistake found.Riyadh
riyadh