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You have recently moved to a different house, and you want to give the news to an English-speaking friend who lives in another country.

You have recently moved to a different house, and you want to give the news to an English-speaking friend who lives in another country. 3LdN5

Dear Peter, I am writing this letter to tell you that we have moved to a new and a bigger house. During lockdown, we realised that our house is really small and it is not possible to live in a three bedroom house with five family members and hence decided to move to a bungalow. It is newly built and has a lot of empty spaces which we can use for the future. It has five bedrooms and a huge modern kitchen attached to the long dining table. It also has a big garden along a swimming pool and a long flowerbed. We have bought two husky dogs for our safety. They love to run in the grass and play together. I would like to invite you to my house as you would really like and enjoy it with me. If the weather is good, we can have a swim too. Yours trulyJulia

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tell
 you that we have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to a new and a bigger You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
. During lockdown, we Possible spelling mistake. 'realised' is British English.realized
realised
 that our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 is really
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small
 and it is not possible to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in a It appears that a hyphen is missing.three-bedroom
three bedroom
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 with five family members and hence
 decided to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 to a bungalow. It is newly
 built and has This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 empty spaces which we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 for the future. It has five bedrooms and a huge modern kitchen attached to the long dining table. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
It
also
 has a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 garden along a swimming pool and a long flowerbed. We have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 two husky dogs for our safety. They This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to run in the grass and play together. I would like to invite you to my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 as you would really
 like and enjoy it with me. If the weather is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
, we can have a swim too. Yours Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphtrulyJulia.trulyJulia!trulyJulia?trulyJulia:trulyJulia,trulyJulia;
trulyJulia