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Dear Mr. NamI am a developer in mobile team and I want to some time off work to complete my qualification in school. Don't worry about project I has finished my task in this week If necessary I ready to support some important task when I have time off. I know project maybe late to deadline but my qualification not only increase degree myself, it can helps me work familiar with some project same topic of my qualification therefor I think it enough value for off work to complete it. Hope you can replay this letter soon. Take care and thank for reading
Dear Mr.
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NamI
am a developer in mobile team and I want to
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some
time off work to complete my qualification in school. Don't worry about project I
The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: "have", "haven"
has
finished my task in this week

If necessary I ready to support
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some
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important
task when I have time off. I know project maybe late to deadline
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but
my qualification not
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only
increase degree myself, it can
The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: "help"
helps
me work familiar with
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some
project same topic of my qualification therefor I
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think
it
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enough
Did you mean "values"?
value
for off work to complete it.

Hope you can replay this letter
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soon
.

Take care and thank for reading
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IELTS letter write one letter for your manager

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
102 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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