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Dear Mr. NamI am a developer in mobile team and I want to some time off work to complete my qualification in school. Don't worry about project I has finished my task in this week If necessary I ready to support some important task when I have time off. I know project maybe late to deadline but my qualification not only increase degree myself, it can helps me work familiar with some project same topic of my qualification therefor I think it enough value for off work to complete it. Hope you can replay this letter soon. Take care and thank for reading

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some
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only
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helps
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some
 project same topic of my qualification therefor I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
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enough
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 for off work to complete it.

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Take care and thank for reading

IELTS letter write one letter for your manager

Letter

American English

3 paragraphs

102 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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