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Volunteer works to work hard at hospitals

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Mukta Agrawal and the purpose of writing this letter is to apply for the vacancy of voluntary work needed in your organization. I would like to inform you that I am a clinical dietician and have also done a diabetic educator course and during my internship I underwent many patients failed to afford the fees required to get a food chart and since I am very well aware that for a diabetic patient it is much crucial to follow a healthy lifestyle along with proper eating pattern, I would like to volunteer my help to this needy people. I could counsel the patients about healthy eating in their entire tenure within hospital as well as at the time of discharge can make a diet plan for their future reference. Since I am working fulltime, I can extend my helping hand on a weekend from 10 am in the morning till 4. 00 pm in the evening. Waiting for your positive response Thanks & Regards, Mukta Agrawal
Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is
Mukta
Agrawal
and the purpose of writing this letter is to apply for the vacancy of voluntary work needed in your organization.

I would like to inform you that I am a clinical
dietician
and have
also
done a diabetic educator course and during my internship I underwent
many
patients failed to afford the fees required to
get
a food chart and since I am
very
well aware that for a diabetic patient it is much crucial to follow a healthy lifestyle along with proper eating pattern, I would like to volunteer my
help
to this needy
people
.

I could counsel the patients about healthy eating in their entire tenure within hospital
as well
as at the time of discharge can
make
a diet plan for their future reference. Since I am working
fulltime
, I can extend my helping hand on a weekend from 10
am in the morning
till 4. 00
pm in the evening
.

Waiting for your
positive
response

Thanks & Regards,

Mukta
Agrawal
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IELTS letter Volunteer works to work hard at hospitals

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  American English
7 paragraphs
172 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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