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WRITE A LETTER TO THE LOCAL AUTHORITY BY REQUESTING ADDITIONAL SPORTS FACILITIES FOR YOUR AGE GROUP IN YOUR AREA?

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RESPECTED SIR, MY NAME IS JINUMOL, I AM A RESIDENT OF THIS HOUSING COLONY, AND I WRITE THIS LETTER TO REQUEST ADDITIONAL SPORTS FACILITIES FOR THE WORKING AGE GROUP PEOPLES LIKE US. OUR AREA DOES NOT HAVE ENOUGH OPTIONS TO CHOOSE DIFFERENT TYPE OF GAMES FOR US. HERE ONLY ONE SMALL PLAYGROUND NEAR STADIUM THAT IS CURRENTLY USING BY YOUNGER AGE STUDENTS. WE CAN NOT USE THAT AREA FOR OUR ENTERTAINMENT BECAUSE THE TIMING OF OUR WORKING SCHEDULE WILL NOT MACHES WITH THE STUDENTS TIMINGS. AFTER OFFICE HOURS LIKE EVENING 6 PM WILL BE SUITABLE FOR US. IF YOU ARE INTERESTED IN THIS MATTER KINDLY PUT YOUR ATTENTION ON THIS. I HAVE A SUGGESTION FOR YOU. THERE IS ONE GROUND NEAR HIGHSCHOOL IS NOW BECAME AS AN AREA OF DUMPING WASTE. IF THE AUTHORITIES ALLOW, WE CAN MAKE THAT AREA FOR MAKING ONE CLUB AND INCLUDE SOME INDOOR GAMES LIKE CHESS, TABLE TENNIS ETC. HOPE YOU WILL CONSIDER MY REQUEST. YOURS FAITHFULLY JINU
RESPECTED SIR,

MY NAME IS
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JINUMOL
, I AM A RESIDENT OF THIS HOUSING COLONY, AND I WRITE THIS LETTER TO REQUEST ADDITIONAL SPORTS FACILITIES FOR THE WORKING AGE GROUP PEOPLES LIKE US. OUR
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AREA
DOES NOT HAVE
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ENOUGH
OPTIONS TO CHOOSE
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DIFFERENT
TYPE OF GAMES FOR US. HERE
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ONLY
ONE
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SMALL
PLAYGROUND NEAR STADIUM
THAT IS
CURRENTLY
USING BY YOUNGER AGE STUDENTS. WE CAN NOT
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USE
THAT
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AREA
FOR OUR ENTERTAINMENT
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BECAUSE
THE TIMING OF OUR WORKING SCHEDULE WILL NOT
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MACHES
WITH THE STUDENTS TIMINGS. AFTER OFFICE HOURS LIKE EVENING 6 PM WILL BE SUITABLE FOR US. IF YOU
ARE INTERESTED
IN THIS MATTER KINDLY PUT YOUR ATTENTION ON THIS. I HAVE A SUGGESTION FOR YOU. THERE IS ONE GROUND NEAR
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HIGHSCHOOL
IS
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NOW
BECAME AS AN
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AREA
OF DUMPING WASTE. IF THE AUTHORITIES
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ALLOW
, WE CAN
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MAKE
THAT
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AREA
FOR MAKING ONE CLUB AND INCLUDE
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SOME
INDOOR GAMES LIKE CHESS, TABLE TENNIS ETC.

HOPE YOU WILL CONSIDER MY REQUEST.

YOURS
FAITHFULLY


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