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WRITE A LETTER TO THE LOCAL AUTHORITY BY REQUESTING ADDITIONAL SPORTS FACILITIES FOR YOUR AGE GROUP IN YOUR AREA?

WRITE A LETTER TO THE LOCAL AUTHORITY BY REQUESTING ADDITIONAL SPORTS FACILITIES FOR YOUR AGE GROUP IN YOUR AREA? r60eJ
RESPECTED SIR, MY NAME IS JINUMOL, I AM A RESIDENT OF THIS HOUSING COLONY, AND I WRITE THIS LETTER TO REQUEST ADDITIONAL SPORTS FACILITIES FOR THE WORKING AGE GROUP PEOPLES LIKE US. OUR AREA DOES NOT HAVE ENOUGH OPTIONS TO CHOOSE DIFFERENT TYPE OF GAMES FOR US. HERE ONLY ONE SMALL PLAYGROUND NEAR STADIUM THAT IS CURRENTLY USING BY YOUNGER AGE STUDENTS. WE CAN NOT USE THAT AREA FOR OUR ENTERTAINMENT BECAUSE THE TIMING OF OUR WORKING SCHEDULE WILL NOT MACHES WITH THE STUDENTS TIMINGS. AFTER OFFICE HOURS LIKE EVENING 6 PM WILL BE SUITABLE FOR US. IF YOU ARE INTERESTED IN THIS MATTER KINDLY PUT YOUR ATTENTION ON THIS. I HAVE A SUGGESTION FOR YOU. THERE IS ONE GROUND NEAR HIGHSCHOOL IS NOW BECAME AS AN AREA OF DUMPING WASTE. IF THE AUTHORITIES ALLOW, WE CAN MAKE THAT AREA FOR MAKING ONE CLUB AND INCLUDE SOME INDOOR GAMES LIKE CHESS, TABLE TENNIS ETC. HOPE YOU WILL CONSIDER MY REQUEST. YOURS FAITHFULLY JINU
RESPECTED SIR,

MY NAME IS
JINUMOL
, I AM A RESIDENT OF THIS HOUSING COLONY, AND I WRITE THIS LETTER TO REQUEST ADDITIONAL SPORTS FACILITIES FOR THE WORKING AGE GROUP PEOPLES LIKE US. OUR
AREA
DOES NOT HAVE
ENOUGH
OPTIONS TO CHOOSE
DIFFERENT
TYPE OF GAMES FOR US. HERE
ONLY
ONE
SMALL
PLAYGROUND NEAR STADIUM
THAT IS
CURRENTLY
USING BY YOUNGER AGE STUDENTS. WE CAN NOT
USE
THAT
AREA
FOR OUR ENTERTAINMENT
BECAUSE
THE TIMING OF OUR WORKING SCHEDULE WILL NOT
MACHES
WITH THE STUDENTS TIMINGS. AFTER OFFICE HOURS LIKE EVENING 6 PM WILL BE SUITABLE FOR US. IF YOU
ARE INTERESTED
IN THIS MATTER KINDLY PUT YOUR ATTENTION ON THIS. I HAVE A SUGGESTION FOR YOU. THERE IS ONE GROUND NEAR
HIGHSCHOOL
IS
NOW
BECAME AS AN
AREA
OF DUMPING WASTE. IF THE AUTHORITIES
ALLOW
, WE CAN
MAKE
THAT
AREA
FOR MAKING ONE CLUB AND INCLUDE
SOME
INDOOR GAMES LIKE CHESS, TABLE TENNIS ETC.

HOPE YOU WILL CONSIDER MY REQUEST.

YOURS
FAITHFULLY


JINU
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IELTS letter WRITE A LETTER TO THE LOCAL AUTHORITY BY REQUESTING ADDITIONAL SPORTS FACILITIES FOR YOUR AGE GROUP IN YOUR AREA?

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  American English
4 paragraphs
162 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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