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Your friend is celebrating her birthday soon and has invited you to the party. But you are unable to come because you are going to sit an important exam. Write a letter

Your friend is celebrating her birthday soon and has invited you to the party. But you are unable to come because you are going to sit an important exam. Write a letter eAOyW
Dear Kate, Thank you for inviting me to your birthday party. I had prepared a surprising present for you. However, I feel so sorry because I am not able to come and join your party. Your present will be sent to you on that day. You know I have been practising IELTS recently and I am going to sit that exam on the same day as your birthday. It is impossible to cancel. It is such a hurry for me now due to the fact that I am about applying to work for a foreign English center. You are my belove friend, I should not miss such a good chance for a meeting so I suggest we have another meet at the weekend after your birthday. That day will be all for you girl. Hope you like my lovely present and have fun! Sincerely,
Dear Kate,

Thank you for inviting me to your birthday party. I had prepared a surprising present for you.
However
, I feel
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so
sorry
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because
I am not able to
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come
and
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join
your party. Your present will be
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sent
to you on that day.

You know I have been
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practising
IELTS
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
recently and
I am going to sit that exam on the same day as your birthday. It is impossible to cancel. It is such a hurry for me
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now
due to the fact that I am about applying to work for a foreign English center.

You are my
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belove
friend, I should not miss such a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
chance for a meeting
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I suggest we have another
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
at the weekend after your birthday. That day will be all for you girl.

Hope you like my lovely present and have fun!

Sincerely
,
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IELTS letter Your friend is celebrating her birthday soon and has invited you to the party. But you are unable to come because you are going to sit an important exam. Write a letter

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
144 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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