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Your friend is celebrating her birthday soon and has invited you to the party. But you are unable to come because you are going to sit an important exam. Write a letter

Your friend is celebrating her birthday soon and has invited you to the party. But you are unable to come because you are going to sit an important exam. Write a letter eAOyW

Dear Kate, Thank you for inviting me to your birthday party. I had prepared a surprising present for you. However, I feel so sorry because I am not able to come and join your party. Your present will be sent to you on that day. You know I have been practising IELTS recently and I am going to sit that exam on the same day as your birthday. It is impossible to cancel. It is such a hurry for me now due to the fact that I am about applying to work for a foreign English center. You are my belove friend, I should not miss such a good chance for a meeting so I suggest we have another meet at the weekend after your birthday. That day will be all for you girl. Hope you like my lovely present and have fun! Sincerely,

Dear Kate,

Thank you for inviting me to your birthday party. I had prepared a surprising present for you. However
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so
 sorry This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I am not able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 your party. Your present will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to you on that day.

You know I have been Possible spelling mistake. 'practising' is British English.practicing
practising
 IELTS Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).recently, and
recently and
 I am going to sit that exam on the same day as your birthday. It is impossible to cancel. It is such a hurry for me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 due to the fact that I am about applying to work for a foreign English center.

You are my Possible spelling mistake found.belovedbe love
belove
 friend, I should not miss such a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 chance for a meeting This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I suggest we have another This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 at the weekend after your birthday. That day will be all for you girl.

Hope you like my lovely present and have fun!

Sincerely
, 