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You and a group of friends went to a local restaurant for dinner last weekends and now think that you received bad services and dear charge. Write a letter to the restaurant owner, complaining about your problems. In your letter, you should:  - Say who you are  - Describe your problems  - Say what you want the restaurant owner to do for you.

You and a group of friends went to a local restaurant for dinner last weekends and now think that you received bad services and dear charge. Write a letter to the restaurant owner, complaining about your problems. In your letter, you should:  - Say who you are  - Describe your problems  - Say what you want the restaurant owner to do for you. Mr1RL
Dear Sir, I am a customer who went to a local restaurant for dinner at 19: 00 with a group of friends. We sit at the 3 table. I am writing in orther to complain about the problems in a local restaurant. I am dissatified because bad services and price. The first thing I would like to draw your attention to is the attitude os the waitress is not good and not enthusiastic. This makes us feel unsatisfied. Bad service creates a bad impression on dinners, affecting the dinning experience. Further more, dear price. The price is not commensurate with the food leading to dinners can choose another restaurant. To resolve the problem, I would appreciate it if you could apologized the customers and offer another free meal. I look forward to your reply and a resolution to my problem. Yours faithfully,
Dear Sir, I am a customer who went to a local restaurant for dinner at 19: 00 with a group of friends. We sit at the 3 table. I am writing in
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to complain about the problems in a local restaurant. I am
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dissatified
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services and price. The
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thing I would like to draw your attention to is the attitude
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the waitress is not
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good
and not enthusiastic. This
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makes
us feel unsatisfied.
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Bad
service creates a
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bad
impression on dinners, affecting the dinning experience.
Further
more, dear price. The price is not commensurate with the food leading to dinners can choose another restaurant. To resolve the problem, I would appreciate it if you could
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apologized
the customers and offer another free meal. I look forward to your reply and a resolution to my problem. Yours
faithfully
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IELTS letter You and a group of friends went to a local restaurant for dinner last weekends and now think that you received bad services and dear charge. Write a letter to the restaurant owner, complaining about your problems. In your letter, you should:  - Say who you are  - Describe your problems  - Say what you want the restaurant owner to do for you.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
142 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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