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Job Application for the Post of Designer

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Dear sir, I, Paris Esmaili, am writing with regard to your advertisment published in yesterday's “Times”I am a graduate of the science and technology university. Iran where I studied Digital architecture. I am an architect with more two years experience in interior design. In addition, I have been a visual artist. For the past two years I have worked as a designer in Dezhar company. I consider myself a creative person and my art work to be original and unique to me. I truly believe that my qualifications and experience make me a perfect candidate for the job. If you find my skills suitable, please contact me to schedule an interview. Your faithfully
Dear sir, I, Paris
Esmaili
,
am
writing with regard to your
advertisment
published in yesterday's “Times
”I
am a graduate of the science and technology university. Iran where I studied Digital architecture. I am an architect with more two years experience in interior design.
In addition
, I have been a visual artist. For the past two years I have worked as a designer in
Dezhar
company
. I consider myself a creative person and my art work to be original and unique to me. I
truly
believe that my qualifications and experience
make
me a perfect candidate for the job.

If you find my
skills
suitable,
please
contact me to schedule an interview. Your
faithfully
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IELTS letter Job Application for the Post of Designer

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
112 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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