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Your friend is celebrating a birthday party and you can not come because of an important exam. write a letter.

Your friend is celebrating a birthday party and you can not come because of an important exam. write a letter. 73jAy

Dear Kate, Thank you for inviting me to your birthday party. I had prepared a surprising present for you. However, I feel so sorry because I am not able to come and join your party. Your present will be sent to you on that day. You know I have been practicing IELTS recently, and I am going to sit that exam on the same day as your birthday. It is impossible to cancel. It is such a hurry for me now due to the fact that I am about applying to work for a foreign English center. You are my beloved friend. I should not miss such a good chance for a meeting so I suggest we have another meet at the weekend after your birthday. We can go to the Chinese restaurant for lunch and then go to the cineme that I had bought the tickets of the new movies: “The medium”. That day will be all for you girl. Hope you like my lovely present and have fun! Sincerely,

Dear Kate,

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