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hullas jonga tegdin mavzu so'rab

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Dear Nick I'm so glad that you have started a new project. I think you're doing your best to do this project well and you will impress your teacher and I help you with this work. If you'd like to paint me, I invite you to my home coming Sunday owing to the fact that I'll be free on this day. There is a huge beautiful garden behind my home. In my opinion, this place can be fine for you. As I know, there are a number of fruit trees in it such as apple, cherry, apricot, pear, peach and so on. The green grass on the ground of the centre of the garden is the best place to work. Moreover, there is a lovely stream that flows through our garden. Also, I’d like you to include a special object in the picture – something important for me. For instance, I have a historic jug at home which I was given in France two years ago. It reminds me my friend Lucy who I got acquainted with there. It’ll be better if you take my request into consideration. Look forward to hearing from you. Nick
Dear Nick

I'm
so
glad that you have
started
a new project. I
think
you're doing your best
to do
this project well and you will impress your teacher and I
help
you with this work. If you'd like to paint me, I invite you to my home coming Sunday owing to the fact that I'll be free on this day.

There is a huge
beautiful
garden behind my home. In my opinion, this place can be fine for you. As I know, there are a number of fruit trees in it such as apple, cherry, apricot, pear, peach and
so
on. The green grass on the ground of the
centre
of the garden is the best place to work.
Moreover
, there is a lovely stream that flows through our garden.

Also
, I’d like you to include a special object in the picture
something
important
for me.
For instance
, I have a historic jug at home which I was
given
in France two years ago. It reminds me my friend Lucy who I
got
acquainted with there. It’ll be better if you take my request into consideration.

Look forward to hearing from you.

Nick
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IELTS letter hullas jonga tegdin mavzu so'rab

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
194 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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