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One of your friend is starting an import export business and he has asked you to recommend a product from your country to him. Write a letter to your friend.

One of your friend is starting an import export business and he has asked you to recommend a product from your country to him. Write a letter to your friend. Lb1Y6
Dear Friend, Thanks for writing a letter after a long time. I hope to find you and your family in good health. Firstly, I am extremely glad that you are commencing a commercial business. Secondly, you asked me about my idea and a product from my region that you can sell in your area. When you visit last time in my country, I took you on my shop. You know that I have a shop of India customs and jewelry and I have a many links with commercial companies who are sending clothing materials to me. Moreover, one of my friend who is a great custom designer, design dresses for me. I well know that a larger number of Indian have been living in Canada. So, I am thinking that you should start a business of Indian clothes and jelwery in Canada. It is great in demand because of largest Indian community in Canada. Moreover, that business will be a win- win situation for you and me. I hope, you will like this suggestion. I will wait for your response. Yours faithfully, Veerpal Kaur
Dear Friend, Thanks for writing a letter after a long time. I hope to find you and your family in
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good
health.
Firstly
, I am
extremely
glad that you are commencing a commercial business.
Secondly
, you asked me about my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
and a product from my region that you can sell in your area. When you visit last time in my country, I took you on my shop. You know that I have a shop of India customs and jewelry and I have a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
links with commercial
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
who are sending clothing materials to me.
Moreover
, one of my friend who is a great custom designer, design dresses for me. I well know that a larger number of Indian have been living in Canada.
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So
, I am thinking that you should
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
a business of Indian clothes and
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jelwery
in Canada. It is great in demand
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because
of
A determiner is probably missing here: "the largest".
largest
Indian community in Canada.
Moreover
, that business will be a win- win situation for you and me. I hope, you will like this suggestion. I will wait for your response. Yours
faithfully
,
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Veerpal
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Kaur
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IELTS letter One of your friend is starting an import export business and he has asked you to recommend a product from your country to him. Write a letter to your friend.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
183 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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