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Supermarket incident car yello

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Dear Sir or Madam, I reckon that you would not exactly like to read this kind of letter, but I am left with no other choice but to write it since it involves the drawer of your customers. Anyway, I have been a regular customer head your supermarket for the last few years, and I never had such issues before. But, recently, when I visited your supermarket about a few days ago, I slipped on the floor and hit the shelves at one of its aisles. Later on, I found out that I slipped because the floor of your supermarket was just mopped, and it was still wet. To be honest, I did not quite expect this kind of carelessness on the part of your staff. Nevertheless, I like to believe that it was a one-off incident, and you are really sincere about the safety of your customers. But, I guess that you could help your customers avoid such accident if you please care to put a warning sign, which says that the floor is wet, on the floor of your supermarket after mopping or cleaning it with water. I hope you will take necessary safety measures as soon as possible. Yours faithfully, Carl Levin
Dear Sir or Madam,

I reckon that you would not exactly like to read this kind of letter,
but
I am
left
with no other choice
but
to write it since it involves the drawer of your customers.

Anyway, I have been a regular customer head your supermarket for the last few years, and I never had such issues
before
.
But
, recently, when I visited your supermarket about a few days ago, I slipped on the
floor
and hit the shelves at one of its aisles. Later on, I found out that I slipped
because
the
floor
of your supermarket was
just
mopped, and it was
still
wet. To be honest, I did not quite
expect
this kind of carelessness on the part of your staff.

Nevertheless
, I like to believe that it was a one-off incident, and you are
really
sincere about the safety of your customers.
But
, I guess that you could
help
your customers avoid such accident if you
please
care to put a warning
sign
, which says that the
floor
is wet, on the
floor
of your supermarket after mopping or cleaning it with water.

I hope you will take necessary safety measures as
soon
as possible.

Yours
faithfully
,

Carl
Levin
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IELTS letter Supermarket incident car yello

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
204 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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