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Your friend is asking for advice. She is confused and unable to decide what course to select. Write her letter and help her make decision.

Your friend is asking for advice. She is confused and unable to decide what course to select. Write her letter and help her make decision. eelgK
Dear Pratiksha, Congratulations on completing your graduation with flying colours. Hope this letter finds you in good health and spirit. I am happy to know that you are planning to pursue further studies. It is very essential to have higher degree in order to survive in this competitive time. I know it is tough to decide your next step. There are many booming fields ranging from like Human Resource Management, Hospitality and management, and many more. But I would recommend you to opt for course that is linked to you hobby. It is very essential to keep in mind your likes and dislikes while making selection. Don't select a field in which you know you more rather than that you should select field where you will enjoy working. It you enjoy your work you will be able to perform better and eventually earn more. I know that you are an extrovert person and have good communication skills. So select a course where your skills can be utilised. All the best and I hope for your bright future. Yours lovingly, Meghal.
Dear
Pratiksha
,

Congratulations on completing your graduation with flying
colours
. Hope this letter finds you in
good
health and spirit. I am happy to
know
that you are planning to pursue
further
studies.

It is
very
essential to have higher degree in order to survive in this competitive time. I
know
it is tough to decide your
next
step. There are
many
booming fields ranging from like Human Resource Management, Hospitality and management, and
many
more.
But
I would recommend you to opt for course that
is linked
to you hobby. It is
very
essential to
keep
in mind your likes and dislikes while making selection. Don't select a field in which you
know
you more
rather
than that you should select field where you will enjoy working. It you enjoy your work you will be able to perform better and
eventually
earn more.

I
know
that you are an extrovert person and have
good
communication
skills
.
So
select a course where your
skills
can be
utilised
. All the best and I hope for your bright future.

Yours
lovingly
,

Meghal
.
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IELTS letter Your friend is asking for advice. She is confused and unable to decide what course to select. Write her letter and help her make decision.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
180 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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