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Write a letter to your superior in response to his interest in finding new job opportunities for you.

Write a letter to your superior in response to his interest in finding new job opportunities for you. D6B2p
Dear Mr. Kalyan, Hope this mail finds you well! This is further to the discussion you had with Renji.   I'm his wife, Jikky.    I am grateful for your support in affirming positive chances and possible job opportunities in UAE.   Please find attached my resume for your ready reference and kindly oblige in further forwarding it to relevant points of contact. For a brief knowing: I have 14 years of Administrator, HR, secretary and project cost control experience in the Oil and gas field, 7 years of Project Secretary experience in construction, and relevant years of Audit experiences as you will see detailed in my CV.   I will be happy to meet Hiring Managers in person for an interview in case my CV will suit their requirements, assuring them of absolute diligence and confidence on my part to the utmost satisfaction of my superiors if given a chance to prove my capabilities. Hoping for favorable responses in the nearest future.
Dear Mr.
Kalyan
,

Hope this mail finds you well!

This is
further
to the discussion you had with
Renji
.
 
I'm his wife,
Jikky
.
   
I am grateful for your support in affirming
positive
chances and possible job opportunities
in UAE
.
 
Please
find attached my resume for your ready reference and kindly oblige in
further
forwarding it to relevant points of contact.

For a brief knowing: I have 14 years of Administrator, HR, secretary and project cost control experience in the Oil and gas field, 7 years of Project Secretary experience in construction, and relevant years of Audit experiences as you will
see
detailed in my CV.
  
I will be happy to
meet
Hiring Managers in person for an interview in case my CV will suit their requirements, assuring them of absolute diligence and confidence on my part to the utmost satisfaction of my superiors if
given
a chance to prove my capabilities.

Hoping for favorable responses in the nearest future.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your superior in response to his interest in finding new job opportunities for you.

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
162 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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