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You work for an international company and want to do a training course

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Dear John, I am writing this letter to inform you that i want to attend training course for about four months as I want to enhance my knowledge as well as skills. This training is about product development. With this, I get exposure to the global market which would be beneficial for our company as I work more efficiently which would be functional for the customers. This training assist our company to get more profit after getting experience from head office. Furthermore, I will come to know how we can make our product better or efficient. So that customers can attract towards it. Recently, I got promoted from Sales Executive to Product Counsel, with this position I think it is necessary for me to gain more training and knowledge about product launching and its marketing. I need your permission to attend this training. I already talked with my colleague, Mr. James. He lead all my duties in my absence. He is also ready to handle all my work. I hand over all the important files and documents to him. I asked him to organize a meeting on weekend with all employees to discuss any problem. I will check the mails regularly and try to reply as soon as possible. I am looking forward for positive reply. Yours faithfully, Loveleen Kaur

Dear John,

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i
 want to attend You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplineinstructionworkoutpracticeschoolingdrill
training
 course for about four months as I want to enhance my knowledge as well
 as This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
. This You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplineinstructionworkoutpracticeschoolingdrill
training
 is about You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
product
 development. With this, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 exposure to the global market which would be beneficial for our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 as I work more efficiently
 which would be functional for the customers.

This You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplineinstructionworkoutpracticeschoolingdrill
training
 assist our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 more profit after getting experience from head office. Furthermore
, I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to know how we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
product
 better or efficient. “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
So that
 customers can attract towards it. Recently, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 promoted from Sales Executive to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
Product
 Counsel, with this position I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 it is necessary for me to gain more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplineinstructionworkoutpracticeschoolingdrill
training
 and knowledge about You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
product
 launching and its marketing. I need your permission to attend this training.

I already talked with my colleague, Mr. James. He The pronoun 'He' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "leads", "leaded", "led".leadsleadedled
lead
 all my duties in my absence. He is also
 ready to handle all my work. I hand over all the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 files and documents to him. I asked him to organize a meeting on weekend with all employees to discuss any problem. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 the mails regularly
 and try to reply as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am looking forward for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 reply.

Yours faithfully
,

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Loveleen
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Kaur