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In the first place, you should try to approach him

In the first place, you should try to approach him D6Wjk
Hi, In the first place, you should try to approach him the most kindly way possible, and you have to be clear on communicating what it’s hindering your productivity, which it’s exactly him constantly interrupting. Try to make him understand that for performing a successful work you must be completely focused on it; obviously, you mustn’t deny answering his questions, but also think that it is essential to establish a work schedule with the tasks you ought to do. At last, but not least, I know it can be pretty hard to remain in a job where you don’t feel comfortable at all, you should consider new job opportunities in which you believe that you will be able to perform comfortably. Best regards.
Hi,

In the
first
place, you should try to approach him the most kindly way possible, and you
have to
be
clear
on communicating what it’s hindering your productivity, which it’s exactly him
constantly
interrupting. Try to
make
him understand that for performing a successful work you
must
be completely focused on it;
obviously
, you mustn’t deny answering his questions,
but
also
think
that it is essential to establish a work schedule with the tasks you ought to do.

At last,
but
not least, I know it can be pretty
hard
to remain in a job where you don’t feel comfortable at all, you should consider new job opportunities in which you believe that you will be able to perform
comfortably
.

Best regards.
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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