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There was a loud party on the upper floor apartment where you live. The party disturbed you incessantly. Write a letter to landlord of apartment about this incident. In your letter • introduce yourself • describe what happened • write what you want the landlord to do

There was a loud party on the upper floor apartment where you live. The party disturbed you incessantly. Write a letter to landlord of apartment about this incident. In your letter • introduce yourself • describe what happened • write what you want the landlord to do d5mlX
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to show my displeasure regarding an incident that took place on the upper floor apartment. My name is Nikita, I live at L10, Green Apartment. Let me elaborate on the situation. Yesterday, a party was held on the L11 floor, which continued till late night. They had been dancing and tapping the floor very hard. Moreover, they played the music intensely and loudly. Firstly, I waited for some time, then I went upstairs and requested them to play the music in low volume. But they all were adamant and denied my appeal. Moreover, they sloshed and in spite of the request they continued their party till early-morning. For this reason, I want you to get an apology letter from them and being a landlord, send them a warning letter to obey the rules of society decorum, else I will raise the complaint to local police. Looking forward to hearing from you on this incident at the earliest. I am available on phone number: (+91) 98765 43210 between 10-2 PM. Yours Faithfully Nikita
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to
show
my displeasure regarding an incident that took place on the upper floor apartment. My name is Nikita, I
live
at L10, Green Apartment.

Let
me elaborate on the situation. Yesterday, a party
was held
on the L11 floor, which continued till late night. They had been dancing and tapping the floor
very
hard
.
Moreover
, they played the music
intensely
and
loudly
.
Firstly
, I waited for
some
time, then I went upstairs and requested them to play the music in low volume.
But
they all were adamant and denied my appeal.
Moreover
, they sloshed and
in spite of
the request they continued their party till early-morning.

For this reason
, I want you to
get
an apology letter from them and being a landlord,
send
them a warning letter to obey the
rules
of society decorum, else I will raise the complaint to local police.

Looking forward to hearing from you on this incident at the earliest. I am available on phone number: (+91) 98765 43210 between 10-2 PM.

Yours
Faithfully


Nikita
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IELTS letter There was a loud party on the upper floor apartment where you live. The party disturbed you incessantly. Write a letter to landlord of apartment about this incident. In your letter • introduce yourself • describe what happened • write what you want the landlord to do

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  American English
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180 words
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