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Your friend is about to celebrate a landmark birthday and would welcome suggestions as to how it should be celebrate Write a letter to your friend. In your letter  Say what type of party should be held e.g. themed, fancy dress, black tie event.  Suggest a suitable venue  Make recommendation as to entertainment e.g. DJ, jazz band etc

Your friend is about to celebrate a landmark birthday and would welcome suggestions as to how it should be celebrate Write a letter to your friend. In your letter  Say what type of party should be held e. g. themed, fancy dress, black tie event.  Suggest a suitable venue  Make recommendation as to entertainment e. g. DJ, jazz band etc Q1Jw

Dear Evelyn, I hope you're doing well, and excited for your sweet 16 birthday next month. You should celebrate this special occasion with style, and throw a grand party and enjoy with your friends and family. I would recommend you to held a vampire themed party, as it is very popular among teenagers. Firstly, you need a nice spot for the event and, I know a great place where you can organize the event. It is located by the river, and has a nice lighting arrangement for vampire themes. It also provides wife range of delicious catering services. Secondly, the music plays an important role in setting up the mood, so I would suggest you to book a live band that would play songs according to our theme. I would advice you to book Dead Man Fall, they are available on your birthday as I have confirmed with them. I hope you will have a memorable birthday. I hope my advice would be of use to you. Yours sincerely, Dinesh

Dear Evelyn,

I hope you're doing well, and excited for your sweet 16 Possible agreement error. The noun 'birthday' seems to be countable, so consider using: "birthdays".birthdays
birthday
next
 month.

You should celebrate this special occasion with style, and throw a grand party and enjoy with your friends and family. I would recommend you Did you mean "to hold"?to hold
to held
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 popular among This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :juvenilesadolescents
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.

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. It is located
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 Fall, they are available on your birthday as I have confirmed with them.

I hope you will have a memorable birthday. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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 to you.

Yours sincerely
, Dinesh