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You are looking for a part-time job at a football club. Write a letter to the manager of the football club. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have tell him/her when you think you could start

You are looking for a part-time job at a football club. Write a letter to the manager of the football club. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have tell him/her when you think you could start G1xm

Dear Mr. Manager, I am John Smith local resident of Windsor city. I am writing this letter to ask information regards of job availability. I am a player of the same sport in fact I have been trained from The Youth Football club that is of yours club only. I have been there before 3 years when I was in high school and, now I am student of University enrolled as an engineering student. Of course, being a state level player before sometimes I am still knowing the techniques and strategy to play this game. Moreover, I am also a team leader now of my college football team. It has been almost two and half year of experience I have in this field. Thus, I want to apply for part-time job in the club as a coach or instructor for either beginners or intermediate level team players. I can join the club as soon as possible. Perhaps my semester is going to finish in 2 weeks. After that, I have almost vacationed for three or four weeks. Therefore, I can start the job after 3 weeks. Timing will be flexible as it is not full-time I can give my 5-6 hours to club. look forward to your reply. Yours Sincerely, John Smith.

Dear Mr. Manager,

I am John Smith local resident of Windsor city. I am writing this letter to ask information regards of job availability.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am a player of the same sport in fact I have been trained
 from The Youth Football You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusinessstaff
club
that is
 of yours You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusinessstaff
club
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 have been there This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 3 years when I was in high school and, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 I am student of University enrolled as an engineering student. Of course
, being a state level player This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 I am still
 knowing the techniques and strategy to play this game. Moreover
, I am also
 a team leader This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 of my college football team. It has been almost two and half year of experience I have in this field. Thus
, I want to apply for part-time job in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusinessstaff
club
 as a coach or instructor for either beginners or intermediate level team players.

I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusinessstaff
club
 as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible. Perhaps my semester is going to finish in 2 weeks. After that, I have almost vacationed for three or four weeks. Therefore
, I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 the job after 3 weeks. Timing will be flexible as it is not full-time I can give my 5-6 hours to club.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterLook
look
 forward to your reply.

Yours Sincerely
,

John Smith. 