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You have a complain about your AC at your apartment and you want to contact the maintenance manager to fix it.

You have a complain about your AC at your apartment and you want to contact the maintenance manager to fix it. aP5m
Dear Sir/ Madam, I am wrinting this leter in regards to my complains for my AC in my apartment. I would like to infomr you that since the begining of this year, my AC is not working properly and it is always shutting down by itself. I have previously communicated with your maintenance team about the same but no action has been taken so far. Therefore, I would like to bring your attention this serious topic and reques your assistance to fix my AC at the earliest. Failing to do so, will led into escalation to the landloard of the building. Awaiting your feedback and response as soon as possible. Yours Faithfully, John Smith
Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am
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wrinting
this
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leter
Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
in regards to
my
The usual collocation for "complains" is "about" not "for". Did you mean "complains about"?
complains for
my AC in my apartment.

I would like to
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infomr
you that since the
Possible spelling mistake found.
begining
of this year, my AC is not working
properly
and it is always shutting down by itself.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have previously communicated with your maintenance team about the same
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
no action has
been taken
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
far.

Therefore
, I would like to bring your attention this serious topic and
Possible spelling mistake found.
reques
your assistance to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fix
my AC at the earliest.

Failing to do
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
, will
The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "lead"
led
into escalation to the
Possible spelling mistake found.
landloard
of the building.

Awaiting your feedback and response as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as possible.

Yours
Faithfully
,

John Smith

IELTS letter You have a complain about your AC at your apartment and you want to contact the maintenance manager to fix it.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
113 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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