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You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend. In your letter tell your friend what the event was explain why you think your friend would like the event invite them to come to the event with you

You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend. In your letter tell your friend what the event was explain why you think your friend would like the event invite them to come to the event with you pBG3
Dear John, Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and good spirits. I am really excited to tell you about the ongoing snow festival in our city. Yesterday, I along with my family members visited this seven days long snow festival in Roman Farms of The Royal Palace. It is organized by the hotel authorities for public in the context of Christmas. Initially, I thought only some decorations might be done by the palace. However, I was surprised to see that the whole place has been transformed in to a polar region. There was artificial ice caps, igloos and snowfall. Manmade bears and Santa Claus too were present to amateur children. Besides, there were slides, skiing and ice hockey games for elders. My brother threw snowballs on me during play. We have lots of fun there. I really missed you there. I remember how you would fantasised the view of colder regions. You always wanted to visit Canada and Antarctica for having the glimpse of snow. Now, if the snow has come to us in the form of festival then you shouldn't miss the chance to be a part of it. Me and my brother are visiting the place again on this Sunday as it would be the last day of the festival. I would like you to join us on that day and make some memories. Certainly, you would enjoy every moment in the festival and would also get some souvenirs for your family. Do reply me earlier. See you soon! Yours lovingly, Martin.
Dear John, Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and
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good
spirits. I am
really
excited to
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tell
you about the ongoing
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snow
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festival
in our city.

Yesterday, I along with my family members visited this seven days long
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snow
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festival
in Roman Farms of The Royal Palace. It
is organized
by the hotel authorities for public in the context of Christmas.

Initially
, I
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thought
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only
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some
decorations might
be done
by the palace.
However
, I
was surprised
to
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see
that the whole place has
been transformed
in to a polar region. There was artificial ice caps, igloos and snowfall.
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Manmade
bears and Santa Claus too were present to amateur children.
Besides
, there were slides, skiing and ice hockey games for elders. My brother threw snowballs on me during play. We have lots of fun there.

I
really
missed you there. I remember how you would
The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: "fantasise"
fantasised
the view of colder regions. You always wanted to visit Canada and Antarctica for having the glimpse of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
snow
.
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Now
, if the
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snow
has
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come
to us in the form of
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festival
then you shouldn't miss the chance to be a part of it.
When referring to yourself and somebody else, put their name first. Also check whether the nominative form "I" is required here.
Me
and my brother are visiting the place again on this Sunday as it would be the last day of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
festival
. I would like you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
us on that day and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
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some
memories.
Certainly
, you would enjoy every moment in the
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festival
and would
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
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some
souvenirs for your family.

Do reply me earlier.
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See
you
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soon
!

Yours
lovingly
, Martin.
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IELTS letter You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend. In your letter tell your friend what the event was explain why you think your friend would like the event invite them to come to the event with you

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  American English
6 paragraphs
256 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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