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you took your family to one of nearby restaurants. you were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager

you took your family to one of nearby restaurants. you were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager AbyX
Dear Mr and Mrs Mohammed, I hope my message finds you well. In the beginning, I would like to express my regrets about how we didn't meet such a great family like you but I hope we will have the honour to visit you soon. As you know, me and my wife spend most of the time away where we have been working in the private sector from 8: 00 am to 4: 00 pm for 5 days per week. Since we didn't abundance of time with the kids at home, so we would like to ensure of the safety instructions in our house. Recently, we decided to install fire detectors in all rooms to guarantee the detectors will alarm us when any fire threads while the kids sleeping or playing out in the garden. We determined to do that after the sad fire experience for our neighbour and you saw, unfortunately, their home totally burned. In fact, we were rush to install devices and besides that, we ought to test it for half-hour to set up everything and ensure all safety measures were taken. I hope to accept my apologizes and wish to accept this box of choclete as a part of regrets and preliminary to visit you in the near future. Sincerely Mohammed Fahad
Dear Mr and Mrs Mohammed,

I hope my message finds you well. In the beginning, I would like to express my regrets about how we didn't
meet
such a great family like you
but
I hope we will have the
honour
to visit you
soon
. As you know, me and my wife spend most of the time away where we have been working in the private sector from 8: 00 am to 4: 00 pm for 5 days per week. Since we didn't abundance of time with the kids at home,
so
we would like to ensure of the safety instructions in our
house
. Recently, we decided to install fire detectors in all rooms to guarantee the detectors will alarm us when any fire threads while the kids sleeping or playing out in the garden. We determined to do that after the sad fire experience for our
neighbour
and you
saw
, unfortunately, their home
totally
burned. In fact, we were rush to install devices and
besides
that, we ought to
test
it for half-hour to set up everything and ensure all safety measures
were taken
. I hope to accept my apologizes and wish to accept this box of
choclete
as a part of regrets and preliminary to visit you in the near future.

Sincerely
Mohammed Fahad
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IELTS letter you took your family to one of nearby restaurants. you were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
215 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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