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Your friend is about to celebrate a landmark birthday and would welcome suggestions as to how it should be celebrate Write a letter to your friend. In your letter  Say what type of party should be held e. g. themed, fancy dress, black tie event.  Suggest a suitable venue  Make recommendation as to entertainment e. g. DJ, jazz band etc

Your friend is about to celebrate a landmark birthday and would welcome suggestions as to how it should be celebrate Write a letter to your friend. In your letter  Say what type of party should be held e. g. themed, fancy dress, black tie event.  Suggest a suitable venue  Make recommendation as to entertainment e. g. DJ, jazz band etc 2N56

Dear lara, The reason I am writing you this letter is to inform you about how excited I am on celebrating your birthday. This being said, I would like to welcome you to the dirty thirty as they call it. Consequently, this milestone should be celebrated with a big party. For this reason I took the liberty of preparing a list of all our friend and I attached it with this letter in order for you to decided who will get invited. Furthermore, i'm thinking that with such an important landmark birthday we should be all in costumes. For instance we could have a themed party and pick the great Gatsby as a tittle for your birthday. In addition, I would like to suggest guanabana resort as the venue where the party could be held. knowing how much you like that place, we could reserve the private pool and have the celebration right on the pool. Finally, for the entertainment we can book a dj to come and play all our favorite tunes. what's addition the catering would be some suitable poolside food such as sandwiches and salads, and not to forget the cake. In my opinion it will be a great way to celebrate such an important date. looking forward on planning the party with you and enjoying your birthday. waiting for you approval on my suggestions. may kazzan.

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lara
,

The reason I am writing you this letter is to inform you about how excited I am on celebrating your birthday. This being said
, I would like to welcome you to the dirty thirty as they call it. Consequently
, this milestone should be celebrated
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big
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
. For this reason
 I took the liberty of preparing a list of all our friend and I attached it with this letter in order for you to Did you mean "decide"?decide
decided
 who will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 invited.

Furthermore
, Did you mean "I'm"?I'm
i'm
 thinking that with such an This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 landmark birthday we should be all in costumes. For The comma is probably missing here: "instance, we".instance, we
instance we
 could have a themed You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
 and pick the great Gatsby as a tittle for your birthday.

In addition
, I would like to suggest Possible spelling mistake found.GhanaianGabbana
guanabana
 resort as the venue where the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
 could be held
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterKnowing
knowing
 how much you like that place, we could reserve the private pool and have the celebration right on the pool.

Finally
, for the entertainment we can book a Possible spelling mistake found.DJdoDrDADLDM
dj
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 and play all our favorite tunes. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWhat
what
's addition the catering would be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 suitable poolside food such as sandwiches and salads, and not to forget the cake.

In my opinion it will be a great way to celebrate such an This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 date. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterLooking
looking
 forward on planning the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
 with you and enjoying your birthday. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWaiting
waiting
 for you approval on my suggestions.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterMay
may
Possible spelling mistake found.Kazan
kazzan
. 