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You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: • Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. • Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. • Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: • Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. • Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. • Say how the qualification helps your job or company. RakY
Dear Mr Watson I am writing this letter to request for time to be away from work starting from 15th of June to 24th of June 2019, so that I can write my final exam on Chemical Handling. I had communicated to you earlier about this exam, so you advised that I may apply formally through writing. Since I know the demands of my job, I have already planned how I will be able to compensate you for my time off. Luckily, the period I have chosen does not coincide with the peak work demands when all staff members must be available. I will be leaving my colleague with my work, and I have updated all the required information for the month end reports. Chemical Handling Course is essential for the work I do. Furthermore, the new government regulation requires that one of our team members be trained on the new aspects of chemical handling. As you know, we already had a non-compliance issue raised in our last audit, so completing this course will be of great benefit to the company. I hope you will see this as worth the effort to complete. I will be patiently waiting for your response. Yours sincerely, T. Mangwende
Dear Mr Watson

I am writing this letter to request for time to be away from
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work
starting from 15th of

June to 24th of June 2019,
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so
that I can write my final exam on Chemical Handling.

I had communicated to you earlier about this exam,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
you advised that I may apply

formally
through writing. Since I know the demands of my job, I have already planned

how I will be able to compensate you for my time off. Luckily, the period I have

chosen does not coincide with the peak
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
demands when all staff members
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must


be available. I will be leaving my colleague with my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
, and I have updated all the

required information for the month
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
reports.

Chemical Handling Course is essential for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
I do.
Furthermore
, the new

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
regulation requires that one of our team members
be trained
on the new

aspects of chemical handling. As you know, we already had a non-compliance issue

raised in our last audit,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
completing this course will be of great benefit to the

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
.

I hope you will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
this as worth the effort to complete. I will be
patiently
waiting for

your response.

Yours
sincerely
,

T.
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Mangwende
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IELTS letter You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: • Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. • Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. • Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

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