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You find that your study load is too heavy and you would like to withdraw from two courses. Write a letter to your college teacher explaining why you need to withdraw from two courses. Ask if it is possible to obtain a refund.

You find that your study load is too heavy and you would like to withdraw from two courses. Write a letter to your college teacher explaining why you need to withdraw from two courses. Ask if it is possible to obtain a refund. 07n5
Dear Mr. Jack, I am your current student from Technological College in Bristol, Urban City Planing faculty, Group 3B. Writing you this letter regarding some difficulties I am facing with your ongoing course. Since the semester have been started I am super loaded with a lot of material you gave us and lack of time. Unfortunately, the course is really tiring for me and I found myself exhausted. I would like to ask you to withdraw me from the two coming courses since I cant continue them. To be honest I dont have enough time to study properly and it cause me fail for the future courses. Although, for some reasons I cant quit either of them. I need to continue working to be able to pay for college. n I will be very gratefull to you for understanding my circumstances Looking forward to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully, Mary Pitt.
Dear Mr. Jack,

I am your
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current
student from Technological College in Bristol, Urban City Planing faculty, Group 3B.

Writing you this letter regarding
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some
difficulties I am facing with your ongoing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
. Since the semester have been
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
I am super loaded with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
material you gave us and lack of time. Unfortunately, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
is
really
tiring for me and I found myself exhausted.

I would like to ask you to withdraw me from the two coming
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
courses
since I
Did you mean "can't" or "cannot"?
cant
continue them.

To be honest I
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dont
have
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enough
time to study
properly
and it
Did you mean "causes"?
cause
me fail for the future
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
courses
. Although, for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
reasons I
Did you mean "can't" or "cannot"?
cant
quit either of them. I need to continue working to be able to pay for college.
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n
I will be
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very
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gratefull
to you for understanding my circumstances

Looking forward
In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".
to hear
from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Mary Pitt.

IELTS letter You find that your study load is too heavy and you would like to withdraw from two courses. Write a letter to your college teacher explaining why you need to withdraw from two courses. Ask if it is possible to obtain a refund.

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  American English
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152 words
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