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You lost your bag at airlines while you were travelling overseas When and where you lost More details of bag and what you want airlines to do

You lost your bag at airlines while you were travelling overseas When and where you lost More details of bag and what you want airlines to do jaop
sir, I am writing to let you know that I have recently taken a flight in your airlines. I took flight from India to Canada on March 12. When I reached home. I realized that I forgot to grab my handbag while getting off from plane. Let me give you more details. My handbag was of black colour with my name Navneet on it. It was a Gucci bag. Inside my bag I had my wallet and some identity cards including my British Columbia I’d, drivers licence, bank cards many more. I had around 200 dollar cash in my bag. Furthermore, there was a picture of me with my mother. Could you please check with your airlines lost and found department if they found any above mentioned bag. It is really very important for me. I can collect it from Vancouver lost and found department at airport. I will look forward to your response. Yours faithfully, Navneet kaur.
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I am writing to
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you know that I have recently taken a flight in your airlines. I took flight from India to Canada on March 12. When I reached home. I realized that I forgot to grab my handbag while getting off from
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plane
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me give you more
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. My handbag was of black
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colour
with my name
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Navneet
on it. It was a Gucci
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bag
. Inside my
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bag
I had my wallet and
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some
identity cards including my British Columbia I’d, drivers
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licence
, bank cards
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many
more. I had around 200 dollar cash in my
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bag
.
Furthermore
, there was a picture of me with my mother.

Could you
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please
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with your airlines lost and found department if they found any above mentioned
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bag
. It is
really
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very
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important
for me. I can collect it from Vancouver lost and found department at airport.

I will look forward to your response.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Navneet
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kaur
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IELTS letter You lost your bag at airlines while you were travelling overseas When and where you lost More details of bag and what you want airlines to do

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7 paragraphs
158 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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