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You lost your bag at airlines while you were travelling overseas When and where you lost More details of bag and what you want airlines to do

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sir, I am writing to let you know that I have recently taken a flight in your airlines. I took flight from India to Canada on March 12. When I reached home. I realized that I forgot to grab my handbag while getting off from plane. Let me give you more details. My handbag was of black colour with my name Navneet on it. It was a Gucci bag. Inside my bag I had my wallet and some identity cards including my British Columbia I’d, drivers licence, bank cards many more. I had around 200 dollar cash in my bag. Furthermore, there was a picture of me with my mother. Could you please check with your airlines lost and found department if they found any above mentioned bag. It is really very important for me. I can collect it from Vancouver lost and found department at airport. I will look forward to your response. Yours faithfully, Navneet kaur.
sir
,

I am writing to
let
you know that I have recently taken a flight in your airlines. I took flight from India to Canada on March 12. When I reached home. I realized that I forgot to grab my handbag while getting off from
plane
.

Let
me give you more
details
. My handbag was of black
colour
with my name
Navneet
on it. It was a Gucci
bag
. Inside my
bag
I had my wallet and
some
identity cards including my British Columbia I’d, drivers
licence
, bank cards
many
more. I had around 200 dollar cash in my
bag
.
Furthermore
, there was a picture of me with my mother.

Could you
please
check
with your airlines lost and found department if they found any above mentioned
bag
. It is
really
very
important
for me. I can collect it from Vancouver lost and found department at airport.

I will look forward to your response.

Yours
faithfully
,

Navneet
kaur
.
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IELTS letter You lost your bag at airlines while you were travelling overseas When and where you lost More details of bag and what you want airlines to do

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7 paragraphs
158 words
6.0
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