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Your friend is about to celebrate a landmark birthday and has asked for suggestions as to how it should be celerated. Write a letter to your friend.

Your friend is about to celebrate a landmark birthday and has asked for suggestions as to how it should be celerated. Write a letter to your friend. ebegp
Dear James, I received your letter this morning and was amazed so much. I’m so grateful that you invited me. I am also very glad that you rely on my suggestion and writing this letter in response to your request. You will surely invite all your friends to the party. Firstly, you should book a table at a large convention center and have a stage. Golden Lotus Center may be suitable, where there is a large banquet room, the service attitude is very attentive. It is around 5 km from your home. The restaurant's food and drinks are delicious. Last month, my family and I went to this restaurant and it really made me very satisfied with the quality. Secondly, I suggest that you invite your favorite band to sing at this birthday party. It's fun and makes the party come alive. and finally, ask people to dress up according to the dress code. Ask everyone to dress up in red and white to make the party look vibrant and you'll stand out. I hope my party suggestions help you get a better idea. If you need any help, please contact me.
Dear James,

I received your letter this morning and
was amazed
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so
much. I’m
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so
grateful that you invited me.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am
also
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very
glad that you rely on my suggestion and writing this letter in response to your request.

You will
surely
invite all your friends to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
party
.
Firstly
, you should book a table at a large convention center and have a stage. Golden Lotus Center may be suitable, where there is a large banquet room, the service attitude is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
attentive. It is around 5 km from your home. The restaurant's food and drinks are delicious. Last month, my family and I went to this restaurant and it
really
made me
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
satisfied with the quality.
Secondly
, I suggest that you invite your favorite band to sing at this birthday
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
party
. It's fun and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
party
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
alive.
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and
finally
, ask
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people
to dress up according to the dress code. Ask everyone to dress up in red and white to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
party
look vibrant and you'll stand out.

I hope my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
party
suggestions
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help
you
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get
a better
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
. If you need any
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
contact me.
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IELTS letter Your friend is about to celebrate a landmark birthday and has asked for suggestions as to how it should be celerated. Write a letter to your friend.

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
192 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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