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Borrowed books from the library, but never returned

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this email to apologize for not returning the books I took from your library on 20th August. I understand that there has been a delay of 2 weeks and as per the policy I cannot have the books for more than a week. I sincerely apologize and will make sure that this will never gets repeated in future. The reason I was unable to return the study material as I met with an accident and fractured my right leg. Due to this incident, I was admitted in the local hospital for 3 days. As I was under heavy medication, I completely missed the timelines and asking anyone else to own the task of returning the books to the library. One of friends will return the material within 2 days. I would be grateful if you do not charge the penalty this time for the delay. Yours faithfully, Sam Thomas
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this email to apologize for not returning the books I took from your library on 20th August.

I understand that there has been a delay of 2 weeks and as per the policy I cannot have the books for more than a week.
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sincerely
apologize and will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure that this will never
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gets
repeated
Did you mean: "in the future"?
in future
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The reason I was unable to return the study material as I met with an accident and fractured my right leg. Due to this incident, I
was admitted
in the local hospital for 3 days. As I was under heavy medication, I completely missed the timelines and asking anyone else to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
the task of returning the books to the library. One of friends will return the material within 2 days.

I would be grateful if you do not charge the penalty this time for the delay.

Yours
faithfully
,

Sam Thomas
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IELTS letter Borrowed books from the library, but never returned

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  American English
7 paragraphs
155 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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