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about my life during the global pandemic.

about my life during the global pandemic. Kyn13
Hello everyone, this is a very important video I think because it is a very important contest, the topic is about my life during the global Today is a very sad day for me when I finish 15 days of practising English speaking in Hanoi chatty. I feel very happy for the past 15 days because I can accompany you guys in the group, when I join the group, I am welcomed by you guys. She supports very enthusiastically like a teacher next to me, I always feel proud of what I have done for the Hanoi chatty group, however, I was given a very important exam on the topic. coronavirus means covid 19 I will try my best to finish the exam.
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I will try my best to finish the exam.
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IELTS letter about my life during the global pandemic.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
123 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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