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Write a letter to an American friend to tell about a party that your family will organize. When will the family hold the party. How many attendants/guests will be in the party? Who will be they? What activities will your family organize?

Write a letter to an American friend to tell about a party that your family will organize. When will the family hold the party. How many attendants/guests will be in the party? Who will be they? What activities will your family organize? d9qVr

Dear John, I am writing this letter to tell you somethings about a party that your family will organize in next month. A birthday party will be held by my parents for my younger brother who having graduated university lately. We invited 15 people to attend in the party who is his classmate. I believe that they are very friendly and sociable. The party will be start out at 8. 00 pm on 8th April. According to the activities, we prepared various things for the party. It is easily to decorate the party not only colorful balloons but also have some fresh flowers. Besides, we also go to the market to buy some food and drinks for a delicious meal. While organizing party, we will give best wishes and presents to him, blow the candles, sing a happy birthday song, enjoy a meal with some cupcakes, candies, soft drinks. After that, it is so great if my father allows us singing karaoke, participating some funny games. This will make attendants feel excited instead of boring activities. Finally, we gather around the table to enjoy the meal with a variety of yummy foods. All of that, I wish that we will have lots of unforgettable memories. I will be so happy if you can go to this party. Let’s give me a ring soon! Best wishes,

Dear John,

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tell
 you somethings about a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
 that your family will organize in next
 month.

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party
 will be held
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graduated
 university lately. We invited 15 This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 to attend in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
 who is his classmate. I believe that they are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 friendly and sociable. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
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start
 out at 8. 00 pm on 8th April. According to the activities, we prepared various things for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
. It is easily
 to decorate the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
 not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 colorful balloons This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
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some
 fresh flowers. Besides
, we also
 go to the market to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
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some
 food and drinks for a delicious meal.

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party
, we will give best wishes and presents to him, blow the candles, sing a happy birthday song, enjoy a meal with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 cupcakes, candies, soft drinks. After that, it is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 great if my father This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorizes
allows
 us singing karaoke, participating This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
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funny
 games. This will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 attendants feel excited instead
 of boring activities. Finally
, we gather around the table to enjoy the meal with a variety of yummy foods. All of that, I wish that we will have lots of unforgettable memories.

I will be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 happy if you can go to this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
’s give me a ring This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
!

Best wishes, 