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Write a letter to an American friend to tell about a party that your family will organize. When will the family hold the party. How many attendants/guests will be in the party? Who will be they? What activities will your family organize?

Write a letter to an American friend to tell about a party that your family will organize. When will the family hold the party. How many attendants/guests will be in the party? Who will be they? What activities will your family organize? d9qVr
Dear John, I am writing this letter to tell you somethings about a party that your family will organize in next month. A birthday party will be held by my parents for my younger brother who having graduated university lately. We invited 15 people to attend in the party who is his classmate. I believe that they are very friendly and sociable. The party will be start out at 8. 00 pm on 8th April. According to the activities, we prepared various things for the party. It is easily to decorate the party not only colorful balloons but also have some fresh flowers. Besides, we also go to the market to buy some food and drinks for a delicious meal. While organizing party, we will give best wishes and presents to him, blow the candles, sing a happy birthday song, enjoy a meal with some cupcakes, candies, soft drinks. After that, it is so great if my father allows us singing karaoke, participating some funny games. This will make attendants feel excited instead of boring activities. Finally, we gather around the table to enjoy the meal with a variety of yummy foods. All of that, I wish that we will have lots of unforgettable memories. I will be so happy if you can go to this party. Let’s give me a ring soon! Best wishes,
Dear John,

I am writing this letter to
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tell
you somethings about a
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party
that your family will organize in
next
month.

A birthday
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party
will
be held
by my parents for my younger brother who having
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graduated
university lately. We invited 15
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people
to attend in the
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party
who is his classmate. I believe that they are
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very
friendly and sociable. The
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party
will be
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start
out at 8. 00 pm on 8th April. According to the activities, we prepared various things for the
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party
. It is
easily
to decorate the
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party
not
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only
colorful balloons
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but
also
have
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some
fresh flowers.
Besides
, we
also
go to the market to
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buy
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some
food and drinks for a delicious meal.

While organizing
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party
, we will give best wishes and presents to him, blow the candles, sing a happy birthday song, enjoy a meal with
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some
cupcakes, candies, soft drinks. After that, it is
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so
great if my father
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allows
us singing karaoke, participating
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some
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funny
games. This will
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make
attendants feel excited
instead
of boring activities.
Finally
, we gather around the table to enjoy the meal with a variety of yummy foods. All of that, I wish that we will have lots of unforgettable memories.

I will be
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so
happy if you can go to this
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party
.
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Let
’s give me a ring
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soon
!

Best wishes,
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IELTS letter Write a letter to an American friend to tell about a party that your family will organize. When will the family hold the party. How many attendants/guests will be in the party? Who will be they? What activities will your family organize?

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  American English
6 paragraphs
225 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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