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Letter to a friend on a book

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Dear Olivier, Hope you’re doing well. I am writing regarding a nice book which I read recently called ‘Live life like a Monk’. Trust me, it is such a wonderful book and I got to know about it from an online article on best books of the year 2021. I purchased this book from the local store and it was the last copy as it is really popular nowadays. This book is written by author Jay Shetty and his experiences when he met a monk for the first time in Tibet. He has shared his thoughts and feelings in an amazing way. It helped me in understanding how we can handle difficult situations in life and be motivated with whatever we have around us. You must read this book as it will also help you to handle the stress and tensions you are currently facing due to your job loss. You can collect this book from me when I will visit my parents’ house this weekend as you place is quite nearby. Hope to see you soon. Best wishes, Sam Thomas
Dear Olivier,

Hope you’re doing well. I am writing regarding a nice
book
which I read recently called ‘
Live
life like a Monk’.

Trust me, it is such a wonderful
book
and I
got
to know about it from an online article on best
books
of the year 2021. I
purchased
this
book
from the local store and it was the last copy as it is
really
popular nowadays.

This
book
is written
by author Jay Shetty and his experiences when he met a monk for the
first
time in Tibet. He has shared his thoughts and feelings
in an amazing way
.

It
helped
me in understanding how we can handle difficult situations in life and
be motivated
with whatever we have around us. You
must
read this
book
as it will
also
help
you to handle the
stress
and tensions you are
currently
facing due to your job loss.

You can collect this
book
from me when I will visit my parents’
house
this weekend as you place is quite nearby.

Hope to
see
you
soon
.

Best wishes,

Sam Thomas
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IELTS letter Letter to a friend on a book

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
180 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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