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apologize for not returning the books I took from your library

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this email to apologize for not returning the books I took from your library on 20th August. I understand that there has been a delay of 2 weeks and as per the policy I cannot have the books for more than a week. I sincerely apologize and will make sure this never gets repeated in future. The reason I was unable to return the material as I met with an accident and fractured my right leg. Due to this incident, I was admitted in the local hospital for 3 days. As I was under heavy medication, I completely missed the timelines and asking anyone else to own the task of returning the books to the library. I hope that this will not happen again in future and I will make sure to make a note of the deadlines. If in case, I will not be able to visit the library due to any reason, I will request my friends to do so. I hope this is fine with you and I will not be charged for the delays. Yours faithfully, Sam Thomas

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this email to apologize for not returning the books I took from your library on 20th August.

I understand that there has been a delay of 2 weeks and as per the policy I cannot have the books for more than a week. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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IELTS letter apologize for not returning the books I took from your library

Letter

American English

8 paragraphs

188 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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