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apologize for not returning the books I took from your library

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this email to apologize for not returning the books I took from your library on 20th August. I understand that there has been a delay of 2 weeks and as per the policy I cannot have the books for more than a week. I sincerely apologize and will make sure this never gets repeated in future. The reason I was unable to return the material as I met with an accident and fractured my right leg. Due to this incident, I was admitted in the local hospital for 3 days. As I was under heavy medication, I completely missed the timelines and asking anyone else to own the task of returning the books to the library. I hope that this will not happen again in future and I will make sure to make a note of the deadlines. If in case, I will not be able to visit the library due to any reason, I will request my friends to do so. I hope this is fine with you and I will not be charged for the delays. Yours faithfully, Sam Thomas
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this email to apologize for not returning the books I took from your library on 20th August.

I understand that there has been a delay of 2 weeks and as per the policy I cannot have the books for more than a week.
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sincerely
apologize and will
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make
sure this never
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gets
repeated
Did you mean: "in the future"?
in future
.

The reason I was unable to return the material as I met with an accident and fractured my right leg. Due to this incident, I
was admitted
in the local hospital for 3 days. As I was under heavy medication, I completely missed the timelines and asking anyone else to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
the task of returning the books to the library.

I hope that this will not happen again in future and I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure to
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make
a note of the deadlines. If in case, I will not be able to visit the library due to any reason, I will request my friends to do
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so
.

I hope this is fine with you and I will not
be charged
for the delays.

Yours
faithfully
,

Sam Thomas
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IELTS letter apologize for not returning the books I took from your library

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
188 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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