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Letter to Manager for a part-time job

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter in regard to the information I received from one of my friends in relation to a job position in your company for Human Resources Specialist. As you can see from my resume, I have 10 years of experience in this field and I have worked as HR generalist with two organisations. I understand that you are looking for a part-time employee which meets my requirements as well, as I am a mother of 6 months old child and can only work for couple of hours during the day. My experience and skill set fulfil the demands of this job as I have prior experience of ensuring the smooth hiring process of new joiners and providing them required training for company’s policies and expectations. I can work from 2pm to 7pm every day as by this time my husband will be free from his work and can take care of our child. If you find my profile and experience suitable to this position, please contact me to schedule an interview. I would look forward for a positive response. Yours faithfully, Sam Thomas
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter in regard to the information I received from one of my friends in relation to a job position in your
company
for Human Resources Specialist.

As you can
see
from my resume, I have 10 years of
experience
in this field and I have worked as HR generalist with two
organisations
. I understand that you are looking for a part-time employee which meets my requirements
as well
, as I am a mother of 6 months
old
child and can
only
work for
couple of
hours during the day.

My
experience
and
skill
set fulfil the demands of this job as I have prior
experience
of ensuring the smooth hiring process of new joiners and providing them required training for
company
’s policies and expectations.

I can work from 2pm to 7pm every day as by this time my husband will be free from his work and can take care of our child.

If you find my profile and
experience
suitable to this position,
please
contact me to schedule an interview.

I would look forward for a
positive
response.

Yours
faithfully
,

Sam Thomas
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IELTS letter Letter to Manager for a part-time job

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
189 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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