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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are looking for a part-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter: introduce yourself explain what sort of job you would like say what experience and skills you have You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear sir, I am writing this letter regarding an employment opportunity which I am in pursuit for since a long time. Let me explain my situation in detail. I am in my graduation and after my college hours I have got abundant time for myself so I wonder that it could be utilised for the good. As I am in the engineering background I am looking for relevant opportunities in the same which would be beneficial for me in the long run. As previously mentioned my situation I am looking for part-time job through which I can concentrate on my studies as well as earn also to support myself in my further studies. It would be grateful if you could suggest me relevant jobs according to my portfolio. Looking forward to hearing from you. Best regards, Mike
Dear sir,

I am writing this letter regarding an employment opportunity which I am in pursuit for since a long time.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Let
me
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
my situation in detail. I am in my graduation and after my college hours I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
abundant time for myself
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I wonder that it could be
Possible spelling mistake. 'utilised' is British English.
utilised
for the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
.

As I am in the engineering background I am looking for relevant opportunities in the same which would be beneficial for me in the long run.

As previously mentioned my situation I am looking for part-time job through which I can concentrate on my studies
as well
as earn
also
to support myself in my
further
studies.

It would be grateful if you could suggest me relevant jobs according to my portfolio. Looking forward to hearing from you.

Best regards,

Mike
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IELTS letter You are looking for a part-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter: introduce yourself explain what sort of job you would like say what experience and skills you have

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
136 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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