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Your Friend Had Made A Plan For You Two To See A Movie Together

Your Friend Had Made A Plan For You Two To See A Movie Together OyQ23
Dear A, Hope you are doing well, As you made a plan to watch a movie on this weekend, I will not able to join with you due to the fact that I need to pickup my parents from airport on the same day. As you already aware of that my sister is staying at California, my parents have been to the USA for three months. They are planning to come back by this week, and they may reach Hyderabad over this weekend. consequently, I ought to pickup them from airport. As I cannot meet with you, one of our friend C may join, moreover he is staying in a hostel room he might spend some time with you as there is a long weekend ahead. Anyhow, I am going to ask him for confirmation and let you know the status accordingly. C is immensely talkative person and who can mingle and adapt all the surroundings in a short time. I hope he will give a good accompany by you. I will find my free time and try to meet you. Yours lovingly B
Dear A,

Hope you are doing well, As you made a plan to
watch
a movie on this weekend, I will not able to
join
with you due to the fact that I need to pickup my parents from airport on the same day.

As you already aware of that my sister is staying at California, my parents have been to the USA for three months. They are planning to
come
back by this week, and they may reach Hyderabad over this weekend.
consequently
, I ought to pickup them from airport.

As I cannot
meet
with you, one of our friend C may
join
,
moreover
he is staying in a hostel room he might spend
some
time with you as there is a long weekend ahead. Anyhow, I am going to ask him for confirmation and
let
you know the status
accordingly
.

C is
immensely
talkative person and who can mingle and adapt all the surroundings in a short time. I hope he will give a
good
accompany by you.

I will find my free time and try to
meet
you.

Yours
lovingly


B
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IELTS letter Your Friend Had Made A Plan For You Two To See A Movie Together

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  American English
7 paragraphs
183 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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