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write a letter regarding the shortage of sports facilities in your town

write a letter regarding the shortage of sports facilities in your town Bg6Ww

Respected Sir, It is said that health is wealth and very first step to become healthy is regular exercise routine. As a responsible and proactive resident of your town, I am writing this letter to highlight the shortage of sports facilities in our town. As per my suggestion, things like large playgrounds, tracks for cycling and running and a well equipped gymnasium can play crucial role in development of our town. It would act as a one point fitness destination for teen and youth like us. Besides students can also represent our town in state level sports competitions for range of games and outshine hometown on a broader level. On a separate note, 30 mins walk a day is must for burning enough calories in body as per health experts. So Joggers Park would be a good starting point to take this development initiative for our town. Sincerely, Paresh Sarjani

Respected Sir,

It is said
 that health is wealth and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
first
 step to become healthy is regular exercise routine. As a responsible and proactive resident of your town, I am writing this letter to highlight the shortage of sports facilities in our town.

As per my suggestion, things like large playgrounds, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitors
tracks
 for cycling and running and a This word is normally spelled with hyphen.well-equipped
well equipped
 gymnasium can play crucial role in development of our town. It would act as a one point fitness destination for teen and youth like us. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Besides,
Besides
 students can also
 represent our town in state level sports competitions for range of games and outshine hometown on a broader level.

On a separate note, 30 Possible spelling mistake found.minutesminmindwinsminemines
mins
 walk a day is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 for burning This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 calories in body as per health experts. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 Joggers Park would be a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 starting point to take this development initiative for our town.

Sincerely
,

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Paresh
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Sarjani