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have trouble studying because of a problem related to your roommate

have trouble studying because of a problem related to your roommate 7LY1k

To whom it may concern>My name is Sean Lin and I am a new medical student currently attending your university and residing in the international dormitory along the south road of campus. I just transferred here after completing my first 2 years at Adelaide college. I am writing because there is an issue with my assigned roommate related to being considerate. the problem is that my roommate keeps very unusual sleeping hours. he often arrives home late and is very noisy entering the room. oftentimes she will being to watch a movie or play music late at night and wake me up. I have tried to talk to her, but she has ignored me and keep doing those things so far. I am writing because I would appreciate that have someone in a position of authority issue her a warning and, if that fails, I need to change my roommate or room. I hope that this can be resolve as soon as possible. please inform me if need other information Sincerely Sean Lin

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 I would appreciate that have someone in a position of authority issue her a warning and, if that fails, I need to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 my roommate or room. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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 hope that this can be Consider using a past participle here: "resolved".resolved
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please
 inform me if need other information

Sincerely
 Sean Lin