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You bought new furniture recently. This furniture has defective. In your letter, write about the problem and inconveniences that the incident caused to you.

You bought new furniture recently. This furniture has defective. In your letter, write about the problem and inconveniences that the incident caused to you. 2a2X6
19Chilanzar district Tashkent city, UzbekistanCT 70711September 30, 2021Mr Dmitri Furniture store directorMagic Furniture Store717 Yakkasaroy district Tashkent city, CT 70711 Dear Mr Dmitri: My name is Shakhrizoda Rakhmatova and I am customer. On September 23, 2021, I bought a sofa, model number 27986, serial number 376267-7738. I paid $550. 00 for the sofa. Sofa delivered to my home on September 24, 2021. Unfortunately, your product has not performed well because the sofa is defective. One of the leg broke off and while I sit on it, it is not comfortable. I have not used this sofa in a way cause of damage. I returned to the store on September 26, but the store manager would not speak to me. I ask you to solve the problem and return my money. I look forward to your reply and I will wait until October 5, 2021. Please contact with me by phone at 412-67-69. Sincerely, Shakhrizoda Rakhmatova.
19Chilanzar district Tashkent city,
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UzbekistanCT
70711September 30, 2021Mr Dmitri Furniture
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directorMagic
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Yakkasaroy
district Tashkent city, CT 70711 Dear Mr Dmitri: My name is
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Shakhrizoda
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, model number 27986, serial number 376267-7738. I paid $550. 00 for the
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sofa
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Sofa
delivered to my home on September 24, 2021. Unfortunately, your product has not performed well
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because
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sofa
is defective. One of the leg broke off and while I sit on it, it is not comfortable. I have not
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used
this
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sofa
in a way cause of damage. I returned to the
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store
on September 26,
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the
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manager would not speak to me.
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I
ask you to solve the problem and return my money.
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look forward to your reply and I will wait until October 5, 2021.
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contact with me by phone at 412-67-69.
Sincerely
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IELTS letter You bought new furniture recently. This furniture has defective. In your letter, write about the problem and inconveniences that the incident caused to you.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
155 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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