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You bought new furniture recently. This furniture has defective. In your letter, write about the problem and inconveniences that the incident caused to you.

You bought new furniture recently. This furniture has defective. In your letter, write about the problem and inconveniences that the incident caused to you. 2a2X6

19Chilanzar district Tashkent city, UzbekistanCT 70711September 30, 2021Mr Dmitri Furniture store directorMagic Furniture Store717 Yakkasaroy district Tashkent city, CT 70711 Dear Mr Dmitri: My name is Shakhrizoda Rakhmatova and I am customer. On September 23, 2021, I bought a sofa, model number 27986, serial number 376267-7738. I paid $550. 00 for the sofa. Sofa delivered to my home on September 24, 2021. Unfortunately, your product has not performed well because the sofa is defective. One of the leg broke off and while I sit on it, it is not comfortable. I have not used this sofa in a way cause of damage. I returned to the store on September 26, but the store manager would not speak to me. I ask you to solve the problem and return my money. I look forward to your reply and I will wait until October 5, 2021. Please contact with me by phone at 412-67-69. Sincerely, Shakhrizoda Rakhmatova.

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because
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 in a way cause of damage. I returned to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
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but
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 manager would not speak to me. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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 ask you to solve the problem and return my money. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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 look forward to your reply and I will wait until October 5, 2021. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 contact with me by phone at 412-67-69. Sincerely
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