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Difficulties when learning enlish

Difficulties when learning enlish 5LJ8A

Hi every one, as you know learning languages are not easy, especially is English which nowadays more necessary to connect people all over the world together. To begin with difficulties when learning English is “the right way to learning” because if you do not how to learn you will feel so borring and your inspiration reduce so fast. In addition is speaking skill, I have been shy about my pronunciation

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 with difficulties when learning English is “the right way to learning” This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
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IELTS letter Difficulties when learning enlish

Letter

American English

1 paragraphs

68 words

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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 5.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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