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Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Explain why you cannot go anymore • Say who can go instead of you • Say why this person is a good person to go with

Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Explain why you cannot go anymore • Say who can go instead of you • Say why this person is a good person to go with GMLWe
Dear Rohit, As you told me, that you made a plan to watch movie this Friday at Napier with me. I am really sorryI cannot make it because I had appointment with doctor same day and same time as movie start. It is really important for me to see doctor, because I am suffering from back pain. However I think you can take Mohit instead of me. You know we are good friends and he is also very good person. On other hand he have bike so you both can go together and even he can pick you and drop you as well. On last but not least I will see you next time. Have a good day. Best regards, Mangdeep
Dear Rohit,

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Best regards,

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Mangdeep

IELTS letter Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Explain why you cannot go anymore • Say who can go instead of you • Say why this person is a good person to go with

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6 paragraphs
120 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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