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You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter the rail way company .

You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter the rail way company. 9L6mn

Dear Sir or Madam, I would to report that I lost my bag in the train yesterday March 26, 2021 Wednesday in the morning at 9am in red line platform in Sharaf DG station. The bag is Delsey black bag. Here are the valuable items inside namely Apple Ipad with pink cover and brown guess wallet with $200, insurance card, company card and my driving license card. However, you can give me call in my number 0527453798, my WhatsApp me anytime and email address lovely12345@gmail. com. In addition, through social media you can posted for my lost valuable things. I am requesting your company if possible to check the CCTV camera as quickly as you can. As I mentioned above those things inside the bag are important in my work and my everyday routine. I am hoping for your cooperation and quick response in my concern. Thank so much in advance. Yours Truly, Maria Sy

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bag
 in the train yesterday March 26, Some style guides suggest that commas should set off the year in a month-day-year date: "2021,".2021,
2021
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Sharaf
 DG station. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbriefcasebackpackpursesackkitpocket
bag
 is Possible spelling mistake found.DeltaDeliaDellaKelsey
Delsey
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bag
. Here are the valuable items inside namely
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Ipad
 with pink cover and brown guess wallet with $200, insurance card, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 card and my driving license card. However
, you can give me call in my number 0527453798, my WhatsApp me anytime and email address lovely12345@gmail. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterCom
com
. In addition
, through social media you can The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: "post"post
posted
 for my lost valuable things. I am requesting your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 if possible to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 the CCTV camera as quickly
 as you can. As I mentioned above those things inside the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbriefcasebackpackpursesackkitpocket
bag
 are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 in my work and my everyday routine.

I am hoping for your cooperation and quick response in my concern. Thank This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 much in advance.

Yours Truly
, Maria Possible spelling mistake found.SYByMySoStSay
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