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She chose to focus her thesis on gangsterism among youths in her local government area, demonstrating her strong cultural awareness and eagerness to not shy away from the challenging social issues that face vulnerable populations.

She chose to focus her thesis on gangsterism among youths in her local government area, demonstrating her strong cultural awareness and eagerness to not shy away from the challenging social issues that face vulnerable populations. kYxE2
Dear Sir/Madam, Sarah Ehijie-Ukegheson, a candidate applying for a master’s programme in social work at your academic institution, has asked me to write this reference letter and it is with no reservations that I do so. As Sarah’s Programme Co-ordinator at the Institute of Social Works, I had the opportunity to work closely with her as she obtained her post-graduate diploma. This unique perspective allowed me to see how she thrived in an academic environment, both showing an enthusiasm to learn and a determination to expand her academic skillset. She chose to focus her thesis on gangsterism among youths in her local government area, demonstrating her strong cultural awareness and eagerness to not shy away from the challenging social issues that face vulnerable populations. The result formed an engaging, well-informed and relevant paper, which showed a succinct and fluent ability to synthesise data and literature. She worked well both independently through her thesis and as a team in other elements of the qualification. She has shown herself to be an honest, hardworking and personable individual. She was quick to take part in all classroom discussions and seemed to innately work hard to create a collaborative atmosphere for her fellow classmates. I am confident that she would be a significant asset both to your university and to this course and it is my pleasure to recommend her. If you require any further information about my former student, then please do not hesitate to contact me. Yours sincerely, Program Coordinator, Institute of Social Works of Nigeria
Dear Sir/Madam,

Sarah
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at your academic institution, has asked me to write this reference letter and it is with no reservations that I do
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As Sarah’s
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Co-ordinator
at the Institute of
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Works, I had the opportunity to
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work
closely
with her as she obtained her post-graduate diploma. This unique perspective
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me to
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how she thrived in an academic environment, both showing an enthusiasm to learn and a determination to expand her academic
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gangsterism
among youths in her local
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area, demonstrating her strong cultural awareness and eagerness to not shy away from the challenging
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social
issues that face vulnerable populations. The result formed an engaging, well-informed and relevant paper, which
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showed
a succinct and fluent ability to
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synthesise
data and literature. She worked well both
independently
through her thesis and as a team in other elements of the qualification.

She has shown herself to be an honest, hardworking and personable individual.
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was quick to
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take part
in all classroom discussions and seemed to
innately
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hard
to create a collaborative atmosphere for her
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. I am confident that she would be a significant asset both to your university and to this course and it is my pleasure to recommend her.

If you require any
further
information about my former student, then
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please
do not hesitate to contact me.

Yours
sincerely
,

Program Coordinator,

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IELTS letter She chose to focus her thesis on gangsterism among youths in her local government area, demonstrating her strong cultural awareness and eagerness to not shy away from the challenging social issues that face vulnerable populations.

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