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You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course.Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you've done since the course suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer Write at least 150 words.

You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you've done since the course suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer KwV9k
Dear Sir or Madam, I am delighted to hear from you. It is my pleasure to have the opportunity to provide some feedbacks on my cookery course experience. The course I took was started from January 1, 2021. The class was designed for the cooking beginners. By taking this course, I learned the functions of some cooking tools and some easy-cooking foods, for example, the cookies, breads, sandwiches, mashed potatoes, steaks, and salads. I truly enjoyed this course not only because of the gains of such a lot cooking skills, but also because of the joys in meeting new people and trying new things. After the class, instead of eating in the dining courts or ordering food from restaurants, I began to cook for my breakfast and dinner. Also, I set a rule for myself, which is at least cooking for five meals every week. The plan is under processed very well until now. There is a small
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of the joys in meeting new
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and trying new things.

After the
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instead
of eating in the dining courts or ordering food from restaurants, I began to cook for my breakfast and dinner.
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, I set a
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rule
for myself, which is at least cooking for five meals every week. The plan is under processed
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IELTS letter You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you've done since the course suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

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6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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