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You want to arrange a conference for your company, and you need to ask one of your colleagues to give a presentation in this conference. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter include: Details about the conference Why you want your colleague to give presentation What arrangement will you do for this conference

You want to arrange a conference for your company, and you need to ask one of your colleagues to give a presentation in this conference. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter include: Details about the conference Why you want your colleague to give presentation What arrangement will you do for this conference QLlWw
Dear Abhinav, I writing this letter to inform you regarding upcoming conference which is held on 10th April, 2021 on our business conference hall. I would like to request you to prepare small presentation on financial strategies for coming project. I have decided to give you this responsibilities. Because, You are working for our company since 5 years As a project manager you have a lot of information regarding the current projects as well as upcoming projects. We have seen your work in previous projects as well and you are so dedicated to your work which quite impressive. We do not want to give this work to someone who has no any details and information regarding company. Moreover, I have allocate number of employees to help you out in this project. Therefore, If you are having any issues regarding current project I am happy to help you out with that. Even though, I had word with CEO he made some arrangements as well which is going to help you with this project. Hope to see you with final presentation. Yours Sincerely, Vidhi Dave
Dear Abhinav,

Did you mean "I'm writing", "I am writing", or "I was writing"?
I writing
this letter to inform you regarding upcoming conference which
is held
on 10th
When specifying a month and year, the comma is unnecessary: "April 2021".
April, 2021
on our business conference hall. I would like to request you to prepare
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
presentation on financial strategies for coming project.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have decided to give you
Did you mean "these"?
this
responsibilities.
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Because
, You are working for our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
since 5 years As a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
project
manager you have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
information regarding the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
projects
as well
as upcoming
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
projects
. We have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
your work in previous
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
projects
as well
and you are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
dedicated to your work which quite impressive. We do not want to give this work to someone who has
Did you mean "now" (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
no
any
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
and information regarding
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
.

Moreover
, I have
Use past participle here: "allocated".
allocate
number of employees to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
you out in this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
project
.
Therefore
, If you are having any issues regarding
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
project
I am happy to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
you out with that.
Even though
, I had word with CEO he made
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
arrangements
as well
which is going to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
you with this project.

Hope to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you with final presentation.

Yours
Sincerely
,
Possible spelling mistake found.
Vidhi
Dave

IELTS letter You want to arrange a conference for your company, and you need to ask one of your colleagues to give a presentation in this conference. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter include: Details about the conference Why you want your colleague to give presentation What arrangement will you do for this conference

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
182 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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