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Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him . You've found another friend who can go instead of you . Write a letter to your friend . In your letter : Explain why you cannot go anymore Say who can go instead of you Say why this person is a good person to go with

Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you cannot go anymore Say who can go instead of you Say why this person is a good person to go with 0AWmO
Dear Devika, How are you doing? Hope you find this letter your health is radiant. I was eagerly waiting for the watching movie to get to gather after the corona pandemic. I am writing letter to inform you. I have received some call at the office for emergency in hospital duty because my hospital to get permission of covid department by government and delhi government is deciding inspection of my hospital tomorrow. So me and my colleague are going to the hospital to arrange a computer for covid department because our administration staff had worked too hard to get the permission So I can not able to join with you. But my close friend Preeti is free tomorrow and she is a very good person because I have known very well for the last four year so you can hangout with her. She loves watching movies in the theatre. Hope So you will enjoy with her. Again, I am so sorry about this plan. Hope you understand my problem. Regards Hemang
Dear
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Devika
,

How are you doing? Hope you find this letter your health is radiant. I was
eagerly
waiting for the watching movie to
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get
to gather after the corona pandemic. I am writing letter to inform you.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have received
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some
call at the office for emergency in
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hospital
duty
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because
my
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hospital
to
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get
permission of
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
covid
department by
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government
and
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delhi
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government
is deciding inspection of my
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hospital
tomorrow.
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So
me and my colleague are going to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hospital
to arrange a computer for
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
covid
department
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because
our administration staff had worked too
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hard
to
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get
the permission
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So
I can not able to
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join
with you.
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But
my close friend Preeti is free
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tomorrow and
she is a
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very
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good
person
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because
I have known
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very
well for the last
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four year
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so
you
The verb 'hang out' is spelled as two words. The noun 'hangout' is spelled as one.
can hangout
with her. She
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loves
watching movies in the
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theatre
. Hope
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So
you will enjoy with her. Again, I am
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so
sorry about this plan.

Hope you understand my problem.

Regards

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Hemang

IELTS letter Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you cannot go anymore Say who can go instead of you Say why this person is a good person to go with

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